Well, I wasn't really intending on any ambiguity about the gender of the narrator, but that's cool if that's how you read it. I was intending the narrator to be a bio boy, but I guess you can read into it what you want. Glad you got the sense of "aching" for a butch top; that was definitely what I was intending. There's a bunch of things I'd change too -- I'm a tinkerer even after things are published.

Thanks for the reply!

-josh