Josh: I wouldn't say "it's a No." I liked it. If I were editing it, I'd change a few things here and there, but over all I think it's a pretty fascinating story. I read him as a bio-male until I come to the "I'm 25 and going through puberty." I like that I'm no longer convinced you are/he is a bio-boy. Even if you are, I love that you fetishize butch women with facial hair. If you're not, it's a mind fuck that you're with a femme and aching for a butch top.