Hey, first time contributor to ssspread.com. I just got a story posted, called "Eat at Eddie's". I'm really really interested in feedback (positive and negative...rip me a new one if that's your opinion) so please read it and let me know what ya think. Thanks!
-josh

I guess that's a big resounding "No!" that nobody read it. :( C'mon folks, don't have me here feeling sorry for myself. At least give me a reason to!
-josh

Josh: I wouldn't say "it's a No." I liked it. If I were editing it, I'd change a few things here and there, but over all I think it's a pretty fascinating story. I read him as a bio-male until I come to the "I'm 25 and going through puberty." I like that I'm no longer convinced you are/he is a bio-boy. Even if you are, I love that you fetishize butch women with facial hair. If you're not, it's a mind fuck that you're with a femme and aching for a butch top.

Well, I wasn't really intending on any ambiguity about the gender of the narrator, but that's cool if that's how you read it. I was intending the narrator to be a bio boy, but I guess you can read into it what you want. Glad you got the sense of "aching" for a butch top; that was definitely what I was intending. There's a bunch of things I'd change too -- I'm a tinkerer even after things are published.

Thanks for the reply!

-josh